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the cure
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:33:06 PM in AEST
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I'll confess to the feathers and scars
she says she can't feel with the cavity in her heart
we're breathless without being known
take your disease and let me go home
is there a way to bleed silence?
I will meet you again in the cure
you say you've seem before and you seem so sure
so many animals to carve
you're eyes are always glazed
don't look not but the clouds are ablaze.
fin.
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Re: the cure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 04:48:51 PM AEST
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| I get the feeling of you trying to help someone. I like the write. Crow |
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Re: the cure
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 08:29:27 PM AEST
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| your writing has a breathless stream of consciousness that i often try to capture but never quite manage. i love the apparently random nature of your words and the meaning that lies within. Kate x |
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