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Paisley Kisses
Contributed by
PoeticReign
on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:35:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dancing fields of blooming jasmine
Rescue me from wasted confusion
Timeless walks on fated sands
Melt away immortal demands
Emotions so fierce convict the heart
My thoughts unfocused are torn apart
Confuse me with your jaded reason
And tempt me with your tainted season
Paisely kisses on clouds we've kept
Cries of laughter bring sweet corrupt
Your pure infection consumes my soul
Plunging me deeper out of control
~Poetic Reign
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2003-10-18 19:35:15]
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Re: Paisley Kisses
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:37:53 PM AEST
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Excellent rhythm..and wonderful lines..especially these
"Confuse me with your jaded reason
And tempt me with your tainted season"
Neat!! |
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Re: Paisley Kisses
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 08:50:03 PM AEST
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Dancing fields of jasmine vivid details and your emotions flood each word of this poem, lovely flowing write Ill be watching for more.
michelle |
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Re: Paisley Kisses
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:28:48 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... loved every line ... Jan |
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