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Tearing from the Inside
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:18:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Giving birth to this depression
Which slumbers deep within
A silent tear slips downward
As these unfufilling years slip away
I see a disembodied head
Entombed in a triad of ropes and bondage
Mouth frozen in a final, agonized scream
A black streak, streaks across the sky
Across the tear-smudged sky
It plummets downward and captures my worn attention
Yet horrifying me with its brilliance and brevity
I dwell on this for close to infinity
Stunned by the clarity of my thoughts
And the revelations that seep
From my agony-fraught mind
I scream and no one hears my pleas
My skin tears and blood breaks
Upon the tiled floor, but no one pays heed
I tear from the inside, unable to focus
Eyes still twitch from the shock of separation
Parted by fate, separated by destiny
Now blind to the ones that corrupt
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by PoeticReign on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:29:48 PM AEST
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dude... this rocks! i can feel it! my favorite lines are the first 2 and the last 3.
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:35:33 PM AEST
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do you mind>??? I was eating LOL!!
This is ewww....but I like I like*huge smiles* |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 08:51:39 PM AEST
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wow this is great!!
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by exiled on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:57:04 PM AEST
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Bobo you never fail to amaze me. lol. i really like this it cuts deep.
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:54:47 AM AEST
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| Ohhh yes...this does cut deep, very deep. Amazing imagery here, I liked this one a lot |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:34:45 AM AEST
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awesome write..love the last three lines. thanx for sharing
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:01:52 AM AEST
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I must have missed this one.. caught sight of it as the most read psychotic poem.. and i understand why, i'm in complete awe..
charxx |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:22:42 PM AEST
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| this is incredible joel...wow...the last three lines are just amazing... |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:12:20 AM AEST
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| love the work |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by SAT on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:28:33 PM AEST
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| i absolutely adored it!!!!! LOVE YOUR WORK! |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by movax on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:42:47 AM AEST
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| Man this is great. Give the poet an award! |
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Re: Tearing from the Inside
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by MrMojoRisin on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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| Wow, i read it once and loved it. Just recently read it while in a stupor from booze and prescription painkillers, and it was all the better. It made sense, just appeared in front of me. Love it. |
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