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The Unborn Child
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What a divine tragedy,
the unborn child thought.
As he got a look-see,
at the distraught woman
carry him in her womb,
for nine months.
With such a gloom
look on her face for the billionth time.
He wondered what was wrong,
and what he could do to fix it.
To make his mother strong,
and help her learn to grit
her teeth and be gratified with her life.
Until the day I arrive in her arms,
to make her happy,
and to make her love me.
The way love her.
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sugar0986
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2003-10-18 16:16:29]
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Re: The Unborn Child
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 05:16:13 PM AEST
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very moving..
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Re: The Unborn Child
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:31:05 PM AEST
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Very telling and moving
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Re: The Unborn Child
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:35:24 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem, Interrestig and very moving. It sounds like this mother has a rough life and a rough pregnancy |
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