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Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:56:47 PM in AEST
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Just inside the shadows,
she feels not far from her heart.
Whispered legend the old ones tell,
the children hold in awe.
She dances in the waving plains,
wildflowers in her hair.
She sits before the shadowed hills,
and listens, is it only she that hears?
The legend roams within her heart,
her journeys bring him near.
She lies before the painted moon,
October`s red reflect,
crystal tear of yearning, a legend to return......Crow
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Re: Listen
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:00:31 PM AEST
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| Oh, wow...that is a beautiful story, it filled my head with so many visuals. Amazing poem. |
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Re: Listen
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:40:44 PM AEST
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wow!! as always,your words make me smile
"She dances in the waving plains,
wildflowers in her hair."
Love these lines..so pretty..and yes beautiful imagery throughout the whole poem |
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Re: Listen
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:23:06 PM AEST
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| so pretty and ethereal........crystal tear of yearning..... |
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Re: Listen
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by POOBEAR on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:45:43 PM AEST
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Hi,
This is so beautiful and romantic.
I had a picture in my mind of a castle
and the lady waiting for her hero to
return.Really enjoyed this.
POOBEAR |
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Re: Listen
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:01:36 PM AEST
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| very lovely and whistful, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Listen
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 07:50:44 AM AEST
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a tapestry of visuals to delight the senses and melt the heart ;)...wonderful write
Shari |
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