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from a distance
Contributed by
ell_03
on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:46:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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from a distance
i open the door
never dreaming
that there was anything more
it was all there
i just had to care
had to care
and take awhile
take awhile
to look a mile.
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ell_03
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2003-10-18 12:46:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: from a distance
(User Rating: 1 ) by POOBEAR on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:04:58 PM AEST (User
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Hi,
I can see that you put a lot of time and
thought into this write. We should all
follow the message of "taking awhile".
I really enjoyed reading this ! Keep them
coming.
POOBEAR |
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Re: from a distance
(User Rating: 1 ) by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:18:54 PM AEST (User
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I liked the poem, good write. |
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Re: from a distance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Zee on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 05:34:50 PM AEST (User
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A short & sweet peom! Very good!
Zee
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