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TOGETHER AT LAST (Erotic)
Contributed by
Del
on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:07:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You unlocked the motel door
And we slowly entered the motel room.
I never thought we'd get this chance,
At least not quite this soon.
The love we felt for each other,
Was bursting at the seams.
All these months our precious love,
Was only released in dreams.
I sat on the bed, you pulled the drapes,
Then sat very close to me.
You caressed my face so lovingly.
My whole body filled with ecstacy.
It didn't take us very long,
To shed our summer clothing.
You placed your heated body over mine,
I could feel your maleness growing.
Your kisses were hot and heavy now,
My body trembling with desire.
We were both so very nervous,
Our hearts were now on fire.
The release you had, you didn't expect.
It was just a little too fast.
'Oh, my darling, I'm so sorry,' you said,
'I really wanted it to last.
You kept apologizing while holding onto me.
I laughed and said, 'Hey, it's quite alright.
Just let me take over, my dear.
We've got the rest of the night.
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Del
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2003-10-18 01:07:09]
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Re: TOGETHER AT LAST (Erotic)
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:14:45 AM AEST
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LOL!! i LIKE i LIKE *SMILES*
MEN HUH?? We have to do ALL the work ;)...lol..this was great.Exciting,honest,and loads of fun. |
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Re: TOGETHER AT LAST (Erotic)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:38:22 AM AEST
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Hey..you go grrl...or rather...well... errr... great write..keep 'em coming....:>)
lol....
Jenni |
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