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Silent Mourning
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:06:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I'm still here where you left me,by the window on this chair
I look to where we used to sleep,now only memories lie there
So silent is the afternoon,my mornings fail to shine
And in the evening's presence,I recall you in my mind
Day breaks with such sorrow,as I turn to the empty space
And In my heart I know,you're a love I cant replace
Upon the satin pillows,only remnants of your whispers
All around is solitude and I grieve with fading pictures
My time is spent alone,wandering through each breath
Mourning for our love,that dies a lonely death
Not feeling so at home here,without you,it's not the same
Remembering the taste of your lips,as they gently spoke my name
If I could stop these tears from falling,if for only but a while
Then maybe I could think of you,and remember with a smile
But the heart must take its time,when love is felt so true
You cannot rush the mourning,no matter what you do
I'm still here where you left me,by the window on this chair
I look to where we used to sleep,now only memories lie there
So silent is the afternoon,my mornings fail to shine
As I look upon the love we had,and hold this heart of mine
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-10-18 01:06:20]
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:14:45 AM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful poem, perfect title, lovely picture setting the mood, wish i could send sunshine into your heart though my dear frend, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:40:32 AM AEST
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So sad, but so beautifully written...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by venkat on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:55:16 AM AEST
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| very beautiful..venkat |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:59:12 AM AEST
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| Awesome..... tender words..... beautiful picture......Great poem. Speechless. |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:32:42 AM AEST
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a biitersweet lovely poem
Shari |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:50:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful and poignant I wish I had some of your talent its not fair that one person should have so much. Lol great write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:08:53 PM AEST
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| Totally beautiful ... I cried as I read this ... it moved me so deeply as I do this so often :(( Jan |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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| i like this poetry, it really stirs me up, and I think it is the most beautiful style. super work. Crow |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 09:00:42 PM AEST
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Oh the talent that is you..this is so perfect. Anything you put a pen to turns out a work of art :o).
Roses |
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Re: Silent Mourning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:57:46 AM AEST
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No matter what style you are writing...it is still absolutely amazing. Your poetry touches, amazes, inspires and captivates me. An excellent, yet sad poem, I loved this one a lot.
-hugzies- stacey |
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