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The Break-up
Contributed by
deathwriter
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Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You look at me,
And I look back,
On the count of three,
You tell me your,
Love for me has started to lack.
I love you a lot,
And don't want us to end,
But our love seems to bend and bend,
Your love disappeared just like a trend.
I don't know what to say,
Because you surprised me with what you said,
So now instead,
I cry myself to bed.
I try and talk to you about it,
But your already with another girl,
And it tears me apart,
That we are now through.
You might not realize this,
But I still love you,
Even though my is in a puddle,
A puddle of my own tears.
A puddle that i cried,
Because your the one i kissed,
And now your the one I miss.
Copyright ©
deathwriter
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2003-10-17 18:10:17]
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Re: The Break-up
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by ziggy on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:47:31 PM AEST
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| step by step... the pain will lessen. Nice words, sad but nice. |
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Re: The Break-up
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 08:44:05 PM AEST
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| another good one.....here is a hug......take care.....sandy |
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