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Losing Myself
Contributed by
Kalika
on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:20:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am losing my mind,
And can not take this anymore.
I will go to my room,
and lock the door.
I sit on my bed,
Stare at the wall.
I can only think,
'Why not end it all?'
I look at a bottle,
Sitting across the way.
I know that if I do this,
There will be Hell to pay.
Still I pick up the bottle,
Maybe I will take a few down,
Then lie on the bed
Waiting for death to come around.
But then I think about our love,
How you treated me.
Are you really worth it??
Why not let things be??
So I put the bottle down,
I know these will not ease my pain.
Now that I have seen the light,
I know that I will see a better day.
Copyright ©
Kalika
... [
2003-10-17 03:20:18]
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Re: Losing Myself
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by EmSal on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:14:30 AM AEST
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This has hope Kal! Keep that hope! I was glad to see that hope at the end. Was a great write. Take care.
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Re: Losing Myself
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by TearS on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:17:31 AM AEST
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| !Good Write!!! |
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Re: Losing Myself
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:08:50 AM AEST
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You are so very right...you will see a better day. I have been there and only recently realized the reason I was suicidal or actually I should say the person I was suicidal over was not worth my pain and tears. Your day will come when you feel totally at ease and once again, you will be happy. A very emotional write.
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Re: Losing Myself
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by Trisha on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:03:44 AM AEST
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| I believe you can get though this. I mean take a step better every day. |
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Re: Losing Myself
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by Saira on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 12:09:25 PM AEST
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An impressive write. It's always good not to lose hope, this way you won't be losing yourself. Stay well!
Saira |
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Re: Losing Myself
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:18:41 PM AEST
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I'm glad you put the bottle down a great poem loved the hope at the end.
Bobo (Joel) |
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