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Laughters a Poison - - - *
Contributed by
Chanti
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Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 01:09:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I watch them mock her,
as if she cant feel,
as if the scars of theyre hate,
will suddenly heal,
something inside,
almost says let go,
give in to the laughter,
blend in with the flow,
but i wont allow hate,
to form in my eyes,
no one should be judged,
by looks, height or size,
laughter should be beautiful,
but not in the case,
i see pain in her eyes,
forming tears on her face,
her cheeks start to glow,
her smile fades away,
and though its no loss to us,
shell always remember these days,
so that when she thinks of her victories,
shell think of her loss,
and for a simple smirk,
why pay that cost?
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-10-17 01:09:44]
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Re: Laughters a Poison - - - *
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by EmSal on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:12:31 AM AEST
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Oh wow! Definately inpiration in this powerful write. Although a sad subject it is oh so true what you are talking about. You stay strong and beat not joining in. Take care.
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Re: Laughters a Poison - - - *
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by hope on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:22:18 AM AEST
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| I loved this..it flowed so nice, and its so true, laughter is such a joyous thing but its also horrible to be laughed at. |
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Re: Laughters a Poison - - - *
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:11:33 AM AEST
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| Oh this is such a strong poem with a great message ... very well written ... I do hope you don't join in with their laughter ... awesome write ... Jan |
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Re: Laughters a Poison - - - *
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by Katie-Kate on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:13:20 AM AEST
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so true - the worst kind of poison. it hurts so much to be the subject of ridicule - as we haven all experienced at some point in time, and to laugh at another expense would rate the lowest in my books. you write with truth and a good flow. i loved it
Kate |
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Re: Laughters a Poison - - - *
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:14:05 AM AEST
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Rhythmic..but what stands out is your insight.Laughter is the best but not when you are the "joke"
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Re: Laughters a Poison - - - *
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:43:36 AM AEST
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So sad but true happens way to often and i hate to admit that I used to do that as well. A beautiful poem indeed.
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