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Out of Reach
Contributed by
ichiban_girl
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:58:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Small glances here and there
Don't mean a thing
Daydreams will never come true
Until I can wake up
You are so out of reach
Out of my reach
Why ican't I hold you near
You're far away and yet next to me
You smile in my direction
This is my chance
You walk away and then you're gone
You're so out of reach
Out of my reach
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2003-10-16 20:58:48]
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Re: Out of Reach
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by garyh on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:13:57 PM AEST
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| seems like whoever this is (probably boyfriend) needs to be slapped around with a dirty yellow sock from 6th grade!!!! |
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Re: Out of Reach
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by Serendippitty on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to this poem, because i have a similar situation. keep it up!! |
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Re: Out of Reach
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:47:31 AM AEST
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| So much pain and torture in your words.... yet is very beautiful. Awesome write! |
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