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rain
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 07:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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falling rain, so innocent and clean,
pure like a child's dream.
set me free from this world of lies,
away from this world of innocent cries.
heavens help me for what i am,
rain upon me and bless me if you can,
clean me from my sins, clean me from the frown.
rain upon me until i drown.
so innocent and clean,
let me fly to the heavens and dream.
lifted and shifted higher than the clouds,
set me free, set me free from the downs.
tears falling from angel eyes,
their pure saddness and loyal cries.
falling rain, falling rain, so calm, so strong,
so hard, so strong.
Copyright ©
frozensuicide
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2003-10-16 19:18:51]
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Re: rain
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by garyh on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:10:43 PM AEST
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| umm... ok well i swear i read this before.... freaky deja vu if not... but anyways good write ;) |
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Re: rain
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by EmSal on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:00:32 AM AEST
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Yeah I definately liked this write!
Emma. |
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Re: rain
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by Edubs on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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Nice one. I like your writing style.
Erica |
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Re: rain
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by Broken-glass on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 01:59:19 PM AEST
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| I love the rain. Very thoughtful and insightful write, I enjoyed it. |
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Re: rain
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:21:13 AM AEST
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this was beautiful I loved the imagery in this. I don't really know how to describe it. Good job though!
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: rain
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by Rain on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:23:27 AM AEST
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i liked this. very well written!
~sara~ |
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