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Wishing You Were Here
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your so far away
I really don't know what to do
But I do want to say
That I wish you were here and I love you
Each day I write a new poem about our love
But it keeps getting harder and harder to write
I know our love is serious
But its starting to fade out of my sight
I don't like to cry at night
But I don't know what your doing or where you are
I try to hold my tears with all my might
But I can't cause your away, to far
I don't mean to not trust you
But I've been hurt to many times
Its just a regular thing I do
Until I truely know your mine
Copyright ©
Breezer08
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2003-10-16 18:54:52]
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Re: Wishing You Were Here
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by poeticbliss on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:10:59 PM AEST
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| Did you get it all figured out? I enjoyed your mood. It was good... even though you wrote it when you were in a bad mood. Sometimes that is when I feel most inspired. |
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Re: Wishing You Were Here
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by Saira on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:12:23 AM AEST
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You wrote it quite well. I really love it!
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