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Desert Queen (revised)
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:34:12 PM in AEST
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Desert whispers on her skin,heated sand beneath jewelled feet
Veiled are the mysteries within, rhythmic hips tease with exotic beat
Scented are the fantasies,that caress her every move
One by one the veils fall,sliding down her skin so smooth
Beaded beauty of the sands,spirit of the desert breeze
Queen of moves most sensual,uplifting soul so free
Holding moonlight captive,by the shimmering in her eyes
Poetry in motion,has the evening mesmerised
The coolness of the desert night,licks her silken flesh
Seductive in her erotic ways,a look could steal your breath
Destined for only pleasure,if your eyes should fall upon
This raven haired dark beauty,that shines just like the dawn
Relax into her swaying as she holds you in her trance
Her knowing moves will trace your senses,your desires she'll enhance
Listen to the the music,as your soul takes ecstasy's flight
Deep into this Desert Queen,into Arabian nights
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-10-16 18:34:12]
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:44:50 PM AEST
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I like this longer version better
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:59:26 PM AEST
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| Very erotic write ... I think the icecream melted again ...:)) Jan |
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:17:01 PM AEST
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| oh wow....batter up!!!! ;o) |
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:49:32 PM AEST
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ahhhhhhhhhhh wow I love this gives the desert a entire new meaning heeeeeeeee
michelle |
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by koqitiana on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:18:21 PM AEST
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| Very good. Very creative. I really enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:41:59 PM AEST
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| dearest sharon, i love this longer version too, what a poem, what a poem! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Desert Queen (revised)
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST
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I guess this can't go on forever eh? Absolutely beautiful. Loved every word.
Bobo (Joel) |
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