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Suicide Note
Contributed by
blackfire9786
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 05:46:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Maybe this isn’t the best choice
But I’m good at making mistakes
Maybe life would get better, somehow
But by then it would be wasted away.
You knew I hurt myself, I thought about suicide
You knew but never acted for so long
That I thought maybe this is what you wanted
Maybe it’s not so wrong.
I’m sorry you don’t have anyone
To take out your anger on
I’m sorry you have no one to hurt, to blame
Now that I am gone.
I’m sorry I held on for so long
Making your life worse day by day.
I’m sorry I screwed up, I’m sorry I tried
And that it had to end this way.
I’m sorry I wasn’t the genius you wanted
I’m sorry I wasn’t as perfect as you thought.
I’m sorry I fought back when you turned on me
I’m sorry for the pain I brought.
I’m sorry you never knew me like you thought you did
I’m sorry I hid my life from view.
I didn’t mean to cause you half the amount of pain
That I got everyday from you.
But know that I gave up on everything
So full of hate I could not move.
Remember my life every minute of the day
And that it‘s all because of you.
Copyright ©
blackfire9786
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2003-10-16 17:46:37]
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Re: Suicide Note
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by Breezer08 on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:09:31 PM AEST
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That is a little confusing...but I liked it. I hope that you never try commiting suicide. I tried and it doesn't help anything. It only makes things worse. Well, anyway. Hope things work out for you if anything is wrong in your life. Have a good write! Catch you on the flip side!
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Re: Suicide Note
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:03:33 PM AEST
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this was really good and I'm amazed how you can express yourself so well about a feeling you aren't feeling. That takes true talent.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by Chanti on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 01:18:59 AM AEST
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| Wow! I liked this one alot!! You have a beautiful way of putting words together. |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by EmSal on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:19:30 AM AEST
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Wow definately a powerful write. Don't be sorry for all those things, they didn't apppriciate you, but you were strong to face up to them. Don't try to feel that way either. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:40:59 AM AEST
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| you know when i read this it made me think a little bite. i hope you never do that cause it's not worth it. you need to face life people just make it harder on other peoples life. i been in this boat before where i thought about it but i talk to someone when i have some hard times. i can say when i am mad i can yell at someone they will listen. |
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