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Woeful Decree
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:48:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I resist this life
you've left me in,
ill-equipped for
living nightmares
of someone else's
life.
Dreams left
shattered
ease so dismissed,
caught up in a snare
of fate so casutic
with strife.
The frustration
in the guilty hell
of slowly living on,
if only to remember
all is lost.
Counting off the days
until the mental seige
while burning every bridge
half-way crossed.
The passage of birth
and the conception
of fear,
an errosion of
innocence in a day.
A quest for
replacement
to mock a guilty
soul,
strained to reassemble
a margin of sanity
for display.
Peace in the night
swiftly is stolen
keeping sight of
freedom's door.
Evolution of grief
is an ironic gift that
destroys one's soul
to the very
core.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-10-16 16:48:02]
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Re: Woeful Decree
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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Deep as..and I felt it all...Great piece
"The passage of birth
and the conception
of fear,"
These lines are neat! |
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Re: Woeful Decree
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:50:05 PM AEST
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a sad journey but I followed you along the way...great write
Shari |
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Re: Woeful Decree
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:41:52 PM AEST
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Dear Jaeann,
This is truly breathtaking. The way the words
flow and the depth of this is great.
Truly beautiful.
Lynn
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Re: Woeful Decree
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:11:05 PM AEST
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Wow thats all I can say....
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Re: Woeful Decree
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by Saira on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 08:54:43 AM AEST
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Wow....awesome and touchy write, Jaeann!
Saira |
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