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Race From Time
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:19:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Raging inside
wanting to be
set free.
Some
malevolent
energy to
take over me.
Remnants
of past evil
waste of
loathsome
deeds.
Want not
of this
darkness
for all
the
eye
may
see.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-10-16 13:19:36]
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Re: Race From Time
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 03:43:34 PM AEST
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love the style of this
great job
putter |
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Re: Race From Time
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by hope on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:16:26 PM AEST
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Just like above, I liked the style of this also. Powerful words in only a few lines...enjoyed.
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Re: Race From Time
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:36:34 PM AEST
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Hi,
I have to agree with everyone about the
style of this . You are so artistic with the
words and the presentation. So great
to read!!
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Re: Race From Time
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:08:51 PM AEST
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great line structure loved the mood.
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