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Griping Me
Contributed by
Bloodydead
on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:00:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness has its hold on me,
As i struggle;
It holds tighter.
The claws of hell dig into my arm;
Blood trickles down my body.
I try to pull,
With my last ounce of strength.
My body goes numb,
I fall limp in its grasp;
And when i awaken.
I will feel heat;
The heat of hells flames:
Fluttering furiously against my skin.
So to feel the pain and agony,
Of all who where before me.
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Bloodydead
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2003-10-16 12:00:24]
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Re: Griping Me
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:21:46 PM AEST
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| Good poem, well done. |
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Re: Griping Me
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:07:08 PM AEST
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It won't let go because it wants you to keep writing like this. wow great poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Griping Me
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by RebelRose on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 05:44:38 PM AEST
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| i love how u used darkness in ths poem |
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