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Goodbye
Contributed by
mercedes
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 10:49:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It started out so good
You know my needs so well
You gave the right amount of tenderness
To balance out my much needed punishment
I wished I could give you more
My time I have so little to spare
My life is in constant turmoil
Feel like I’m being split in two
Until I can be only yours
Until I can freely give myself
The best thing I can do for you
Is to say goodbye now
I will never replace you with another
Your lessons I have learned well
I only wish I could stay here with you
But I must first learn to be true
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-10-16 10:49:35]
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Re: Goodbye
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:39:08 AM AEST
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| ahhhhhhhhh a commendable task.......to be true......tis so very heartbreaking at times.......you'll find it!!!! |
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Re: Goodbye
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by hope on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:26:33 PM AEST
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| man this one hit me hard....so very true. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:56:43 PM AEST
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MER
ANOTHER WELL DONE ONE SIS
WISH THERE WAS MORE FOR BOTH OF US ,,, JUST KNOW U R LOVED ...
U KNOW WHO |
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