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Helpless
Contributed by
Kalika
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:34:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I felt alive again,
But I paid the price for that joy.
A day in the hospital,
Five thousand pills I cant keep down.
Why am I so weak,
So completely helpless,
That I cant even stand on my own.
Take it easy they say,
You only have so much time left.
What good is this time,
If I cant be free to live??
I thought things were better,
Soon, I thought,
My life would be great.
Apparently thats not so,
But who cares anyway??
Who wants to live,
Who wants to be free??
Copyright ©
Kalika
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2003-10-16 04:34:54]
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Re: Helpless
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by venkat on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 05:04:57 AM AEST
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| Oh..it is heart breaking...Kalika....you will definitely stand on your own..don't give up your hope.blessings my child..venkat |
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Re: Helpless
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by TearS on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:28:38 AM AEST
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| !It's really nice and wonderful!!! |
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Re: Helpless
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:54:56 AM AEST
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| i see such strength in your work!!!!!!!! great job!!! |
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Re: Helpless
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by EmSal on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:54:56 AM AEST
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Hey we care Kal, it might take awhile but soon you will be writing about the PAST experience...and you will be free...anyway all the best and take care. Great write.
Emma. |
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Re: Helpless
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:09:36 AM AEST
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| Wow....this is simplistic but heartbreakingly sad. I sense anger here...please keep your chin up and one day you will be revelling in your freedom and life. |
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