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Descent (rusting at the bottom)
Contributed by
undeadsuperstar
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:02:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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How far down will I perpetuate
Riding my descent
Picking scabs that never heal
Until rusted, torn, broken, bent
I reach the stagnated source
Of my poisoned well
And cower lost devoid of hope
Burning in my hell
Lost to faith and love alike
I bide my time in wait
Sheltered by my pain I grow
Feeding upon my hate
Hardened by my disappointments
Strangling my desires
Gathering cinders of broken dreams
Rekindling my old fires
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undeadsuperstar
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2003-10-16 01:02:53]
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Re: Descent (rusting at the bottom)
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:29:40 AM AEST
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| Fantastic write ... can relate to this so well ... Jan |
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Re: Descent (rusting at the bottom)
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by Lisa_Fisher on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:42:34 AM AEST
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Brilliant Write
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Re: Descent (rusting at the bottom)
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by mercedes on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:57:12 AM AEST
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| Great write...I too can relate |
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Re: Descent (rusting at the bottom)
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:16:08 PM AEST
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| great write!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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