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Who am I?
Contributed by
hope
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:00:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Who am I to question you?
Don’t you know what I’ve been through?
I have not lived a perfect life
My body has been my own sacrifice
I destroy all things that are good
I would hide away, if I could
I make things run away
No one ever wants to stay
Getting close is what I fear
But then again no one hears
They think they know me deep inside
But they do not know the pain I hide
No one knows the life I led
Or the thoughts that run through my head
The pain is what drives me mad
The loneliness is what makes me sad
In this life theirs so much pain
I often wonder “what’s the gain?”
Life on earth is filled with sorrow
But is there hope in a new tomorrow?
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hope
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2003-10-16 01:00:37]
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Re: Who am I?
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 02:06:54 AM AEST
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| Great write ... thought-provoking words ... Jan |
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Re: Who am I?
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:17:59 PM AEST
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| you read my mind.........excellent!!!!!! |
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Re: Who am I?
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 10:11:27 PM AEST
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HOPE is such an important element of life. I am happy that you have found hope now.
I am a Christian. That is where my hope first came to me. After that, I found that writing was wonderful therapy. If I feel down, I just can't wait to get alone and write. Bizzy |
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Re: Who am I?
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:04:27 AM AEST
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There's always hope for tomorrow. Always.
Take care.
David |
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