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Grief
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:33:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Tears roll down
my face,
As I hear the words
goodbye baby
softly leave your mouth.
Floating by my ear,
like a wind that would not stop,
that left me in so much pain.
I never thought this day,
would come so soon.
I thought are relationship
was perfect,
but now I’m lost,
but most of all confused
on what I did wrong,
and how to fix it.
Was I not good enough for you.
Did you find someone else better,
or was it just are time,
to part.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
... [
2003-10-15 17:33:15]
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Re: Grief
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by Desi on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:31:15 PM AEST
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This is sad. Its really hard to lose someone you love. Great write.
Desi~ |
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Re: Grief
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:23:13 PM AEST
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| a kick in the gut.....good read.... |
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