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- Tranquillity called Chaos -
Contributed by
gem48
on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The perfectly formed beads of blood lie there,
Gently glistening in the artificial light.
Eyes glazed over with red mist,
Harmonising with the clear drops of tears.
Only one thing on the mind.
That split second no one else exists,
One aim, a soul focus.
Then nothing.
People start seeping back into the world,
Return to the surrounding life,
The happy family life.
The soul creator,
The soul problem,
The soul solution finder.
The vicious circle entrapping all who enter.
Welcome to the tranquillity called chaos.
Copyright ©
gem48
... [
2003-10-15 17:05:00]
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Re: - Tranquillity called Chaos -
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by Desi on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:40:01 PM AEST
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I loved this piece. Its true art, unlike some of the wannabe writers out there.
Keep it up always
Desi~ |
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Re: - Tranquillity called Chaos -
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:23:37 PM AEST
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| Stunning imagery, eloquently written. the repetition in the final stanza is very effective. another great write, Kate x |
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