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a simply sweet kiss
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 11:42:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the bright of day and dark of nights
we should be holding each other tight
alas, life has made us deal with this
whilst we're longing simply a sweet kiss,
im far away from he to which i belong
and all these days are long and longgg...
the sun shines on him and flowers bloom
when im alone dreaming within my room,
whilst here the trees they turn all colours
and fragrant spring to him is now restored
these stars then go visit him and leave me
another long day comes to be with me,
how sad to be away from him over here
to emphasize i look out and see a lone deer
walking across the pastures in peace outside
oh, beautiful deer, in you, may i confide?
im far away from he to which i belong
and all these days are long and longgg...
it seems forever 'til im again in his arms
but i know too, he misses my charms,
the bright of day and dark of nights
we should be holding each other tight
alas, life has made us deal with this
whilst we're awaiting a simply sweet kiss.
*ø,¸¸,ø*°´love°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´x°*ø,¸¸,ø*°you´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by Bongo on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:09:24 PM AEST
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Yes, that simple sweet kiss needs some assistance
It would be planted right now
If it were not for the distance
To struddle that puddle, tell me how
To kiss at this moment lacks touch at this instant
But when finally together...Wow. |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 01:40:45 PM AEST
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your poems always move me
such sweet love and the comment
makes it even sweeter
i got a huge cavity reading this
I LOVE IT
Putter |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 02:23:19 PM AEST
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oh so beautiful like a swan
I wish I had a fairies wand
So across the space
I could help you race
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:17:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sweet as always, Nessa. I wish you all the happiness in the world!!... just as long as you leave a little for the rest of us, LOL. :P
~ Dee |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:50:22 PM AEST
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| The ache of love ... so beautiful .. Jan |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:49:11 PM AEST
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| beautiful, I wish you every good thing. Crow |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by venkat on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:06:47 AM AEST
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| wow!! sweet romantic poem..simply superb. very, very beautiful.. hmmm..good luck ! venkat |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by norm on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:35:13 AM AEST
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To really understand the sites
I must digest what Bongo writes
For One and One does add to Two
If it's not so then you are blue..
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by Saira on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:37:57 PM AEST
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Such a lovely and touching write. Loved it!
Saira |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:12:44 PM AEST
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hi ladyfawn,
oh how sweet these words sound in the ear.you make me want to kiss a lady.
you sure express your self well from the heart.i hope he knows he have a diamond already. |
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Re: a simply sweet kiss
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by Merry on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 02:47:07 PM AEST
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a very sweet kiss to be sure when at last you are together again - may it be soon
un beso
merry |
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