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Dark angel
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 08:07:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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there you are again
though you are not my friend
you come in and out of my life
my heart tries hard to mend.
i see the dark angel comming
who does he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine once more.
i know you are a leader
you are a messenger of death
one i can not stop
as you take away their last breath.
i see the dark angel comming
who has he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine oce more.
i hold a high respect for you
you do your job so well
protecting some who are good
and leading some to hell.
i see the dark angel comming
who has he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine once more.
the dark angel is comming
it´s time for me to go
forgive me for my sins
take away my sorrow.
Copyright ©
kolbrun
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2003-10-15 08:07:06]
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Re: Dark angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 09:30:46 AM AEST
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| I don't understand how any one could not like this, I think it is brilliant. So well written and very emotional. It paints pictures in your mind, I loved it, I really did. |
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Re: Dark angel
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:48:30 PM AEST
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I don't know who the dark angel is but in any case I loved the line structure in this. Great poem.
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Re: Dark angel
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:19:39 PM AEST
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I also don't see how anyone could not like this. A truly excellent write. Keep it up!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Dark angel
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by mercedes on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 10:16:27 AM AEST
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| I really liked this. Great write |
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