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Cancererous Obsession
Contributed by
undeadsuperstar
on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 01:26:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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emotional
malignancy
like cancer grows
inside of me
wish I could blow
this mess away
one trigger pull
and I escape
obliterate
them from my brain
each one of you
all of my pain
Copyright ©
undeadsuperstar
... [
2003-10-15 01:26:39]
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Re: Cancererous Obsession
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:16:45 AM AEST
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It saddens me to read of such depression..if I could send you a lil sunshine I would...Please be good to yourself and take care.
You express yourself well..let your voice be heard.Dont give in to the darkness :) |
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Re: Cancererous Obsession
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:15:08 AM AEST
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Wow strong words! A painful short poem...but brilliant. Take care now.
Emma. |
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Re: Cancererous Obsession
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 11:24:30 AM AEST
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| excellent...simple and sweet..........and very dark.......and lonley...great write....... |
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Re: Cancererous Obsession
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by Modest on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:57:58 PM AEST
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Hey this is Modest here!
Oh my goodness, this piece you've done is absolutely brilliant, the way you metaphorically put your words together is great! Do me a favor? Dont ever stop writting. |
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Re: Cancererous Obsession
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by Modest on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:57:59 PM AEST
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Hey this is Modest here!
Oh my goodness, this piece you've done is absolutely brilliant, the way you metaphorically put your words together is great! Do me a favor? Dont ever stop writting. |
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Re: Cancererous Obsession
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by Serendippitty on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 12:01:13 AM AEST
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| Wow... this poem was soo powerful, but it brought me down. It's amazing how you could express so much in so little words... I'm just not one for suicide and darkness, but still, an excellent write |
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