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broken
Contributed by
fayeelizibeth
on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 10:54:42 PM in AEST
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this relationship-
well i think i may have broken it
by
being to boring and to old for you
i think when i grew up
that you got all fed up
with waiting for
your time to come
but why
did you have to do it that way
and why
did i cry over you days and days
and why
was i caught up in this sadness
i always knew one day you'd end this
but i didn't know today
i didn't know today
this relationship
well i think i may have broken it
by
being so happy and loving you all the time
i guess you couldn't take
the way i wasn't fake
like someone else
you know so well
but why
did you have to do it that way
and why
did i cry over you days and days
and why
was i caught up in this sadness
i always knew one day you'd end this
but i didn't know today
i didn't know today
this relationship
well i'm kinda happy i broke it cuz
your too little and to dumb for me
and when i think about
the way that things worked out
i realize that
i've done ok
but why?
did i cling to you for so long
and why
even when you treated me wrong
and why
was i caught up in this sadness
i always knew i would get through this
and now i've found my way
now i've found my way
i left you in yesterday
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fayeelizibeth
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2003-10-14 22:54:42]
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Re: broken
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:31:46 AM AEST
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A horrible experience to go through...but your write has hope...the last line - excellent all the best.
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Re: broken
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:01:38 PM AEST
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The rhythm and flow of this is excellent. And I love the ending. Great write!
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