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ssshhh...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:03:30 PM in AEST
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Hushed by my inner self
The more knowing yet hungry part of me
Whispers of soul caged within reality...
Where they must stay..
for now...today
~sssshhh~ I hear from the depths
Awaken nothing you cant hold..
Leave now,do not disturb..
Romantic dreams of old
Lay to rest the fantasies
Upon the pages between lines
~ssshhh~ I hear myself comforting
This cautious heart of mine
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LovingWhispers
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2003-10-14 20:03:30]
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Re: ssshhh...
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:06:49 PM AEST
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| the image is gorgeous as is the writing....... |
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Re: ssshhh...
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:31:30 PM AEST
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wonderful
Shari |
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Re: ssshhh...
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST
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| wonderfully done maam--Russ |
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Re: ssshhh...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 10:01:08 PM AEST
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This poem painted pictures in my head...I loved it
-hugz- stacey |
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Re: ssshhh...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:17:36 AM AEST
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sigh....
"Lay to rest the fantasies
Upon the pages between lines"
Loved this, Whispers...
Jenni
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Re: ssshhh...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 11:32:39 AM AEST
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| I just love this, so pretty. |
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Re: ssshhh...
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by Broken921 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:45:52 AM AEST
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| Very good !! |
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