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Intangible Mist
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
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Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 12:22:53 PM in AEST
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Devoured by a glimmering of
impenetrable stars
Only that rupturing from within they do not cease their searing contusion
of the diffusing bright white light
white and bright
the bright white light ..
As the night is deftly navigated away
we are enveloped by luke warm timewarps
we traverse the ambiguous night sky in a comatose state of asphyxiation from within
our gazing stars floating forever suspended
Bracing ourselves from withinthem,
Now slackening ,
jawlines devoid of belligerence
Now limpid
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CARAAAAA
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2003-10-14 12:22:53]
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Re: Intangible Mist
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by Philipa on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 12:34:16 PM AEST
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Very intense with plenty of imagery and motion. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Intangible Mist
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 04:12:17 PM AEST
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Belligerence--- that's in my poem "My Best Friend's Name is Webster", except that poems quite a bit more light-hearted, if ya know what I mean. Excellent imagery in here, but I kind of had to scramble for the dictionary a bit. That's probably just me =) Anyways, twas a beautiful write. I loved the subject- I always love poems about the night sky. It's just so mysterious, wouldn't you say?
Well, great write!
Love Joy and Peace,
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