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Last Goodbyes
Contributed by
Pompous
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Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 05:32:22 AM in AEST
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a lonesome boy stands tall
upon her dark grave
he can hear her whisper and call
his heart hollow like a cave
he held her in his arms
as she had her last breath
he held her bloodied palms
and watch her painful death
he killed her by a crash
others died too
it was a deadly smash
witnessed by a small few
crawled through the broken glass
he reaches to where she laid
she barely moves, without a fuss
he's destroyed but gives her shade
standing before her grave again
the clouds darken the skies
he writes he's dying words with a pen
and says his last goodbyes
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2003-10-14 05:32:22]
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Re: Last Goodbyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:47:35 AM AEST
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| Oh dear so sad, yet so beautiful. This is such a true write and unfortunately happens so many times in life. You put a tradgedy into words that I am sure many people can relate to. Good work...just excellent |
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Re: Last Goodbyes
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:55:02 AM AEST
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A tragedy... but beautiful beyond words. Thank you for sharing pomp...
Lindsey |
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