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Waiter (for what?)
Contributed by
AJG
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Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 01:04:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Half your attention
A tithe of your time
A quarter of loving
A look that's benign
A shout underwater
An unanswered call
I hear what you're saying
An echo-if all
A verbal submission
On bended knee
A melodious jingle
Dedicated to me
Sent back like a steak
With one carnal tear
To bloody for well-done
To burnt to be rare
Copyright ©
AJG
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2003-10-14 01:04:01]
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Re: Waiter (for what?)
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 02:15:31 AM AEST
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Re: Waiter (for what?)
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:46:09 AM AEST
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Yes indeed sent back with a tear.
This is another excellent poem.......lost in time I am this night...and lucky for it too......the future this night was too dark for my tastes....so back in time I dwell.
Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Waiter (for what?)
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:17:30 PM AEST
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hmm, your style or writing is really very unique. I think this poem can be interpreted many ways and I don't know if you intended to do that or not but it has left me wondering...good write.
Katie |
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