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A BROKEN CLASP
Contributed by
Del
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 11:55:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So passionately we were in love.
We knew it would last forever.
I gave my heart and soul to you.
You promised you would leave me never
.
An angel gave us a golden necklace,
To place around each heart.
With the security of these blessed links
Our love would never depart.
We lived and loved so carefree and gay
For such a very long time.
Suddenly one day something happened,
Your love was no longer mine.
You left me for another.
My tears were hard to hide.
I never thought I could ache like this.
I cried and cried and cried.
After a very short time, you came back,
Much to my surprise!
You told me you never stopped loving me.
Now you had tears in your eyes.
That same angel came to you last night,
Placed a broken clasp in your hand.
Our love was always tried and true.
So now we both understand.
.
Copyright ©
Del
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2003-10-13 23:55:28]
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Re: A BROKEN CLASP
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 02:18:57 AM AEST
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| nice write.. i really enjoyed this great story too ;) |
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Re: A BROKEN CLASP
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:41:53 PM AEST
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| Garyh, glad to meet you. I thought this love poem was wonderful and a little different. You write well, very well. A new friend, Bizzy |
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