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let go
Contributed by
Merry
on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 05:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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striving for the next step
around the corner
out of sight
out of breath
reason has fled
sunlight fails
and sets against
paling sky in retreat
virtual hand of time
stops ticking
talking back
or is that my heartbeat
repeating thunder
incongruous
degenerate lover
why
talk that way
leave me alone
leave me alone
quick look over my shoulder
shadows
waving back at me
mocking
dancing with delight
daring me
daring
to speak to strangers
who knows
what danger
who knows
anything at all
altered
changed
after the last carnage
completely ignored
range of emtions
preempted
let go of me
i said
let go
gmm2003
Copyright ©
Merry
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2003-10-13 17:34:46]
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Re: let go
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 06:43:40 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling well ... great words - the flow builds and takes you to a great ending .... Jan |
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Re: let go
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by Philipa on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:47:35 PM AEST
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Very powerful write. Good flow and suspence. Thanks for sharing merry.
Philipa
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Re: let go
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 08:00:20 PM AEST
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Get out of my head, there isnt room enough for the both of us. ;o)
Well done my friend...
Larry |
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Re: let go
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:39:35 PM AEST
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| this moves right along, I could have read more. Crow |
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