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brings me up brings me down
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:32:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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people changing all around,
brings me up brings me down.
closer together, farther apart,
ending at the start,
tearing away,
day by day,
motion sickness,
defying thickness.
no longer friends?
is it coming to the ends?
no speaking, no words,
no emails, no forwards
last hi,
final goodbye,
people change all around.
brings me up, brings me down.
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2003-10-13 13:32:30]
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Re: brings me up brings me down
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 06:55:57 PM AEST
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this was good, but ppl always change I hope that whoever this was to that u guys remain friends.
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Re: brings me up brings me down
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 02:35:35 AM AEST
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Yeah wether you change or your friend...it happens. Just hope you do stay friends or if not get closure...get a goodbye...I didn't. Good poem.
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Re: brings me up brings me down
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by Evanescencefreak on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 04:36:43 AM AEST
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| I think this is really good and I know that change can be hard but remember; somethings good things fall apart so great things can come together. Its still awesome even if I got the message all wrong. |
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