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-Symbiotic Rose-
Contributed by
gem48
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:04:23 PM in AEST
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The thorns rip through my flesh,
Wounding deep into my heart.
Inside the bud blooms.
Its poison looks dissolve my soul.
Nothing can help but stand and stare,
At the stunning rose in bloom.
For the one she inhabits,
Left permanently scarred,
Lovestruck with the memory left behind.
After the rose is gone nothing shall remain,
Bar the one scar that shall never fade.
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gem48
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2003-10-13 13:04:23]
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Re: -Symbiotic Rose-
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:33:41 PM AEST
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| be-aut-i-ful! |
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Re: -Symbiotic Rose-
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 02:05:34 PM AEST
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| beautiful, expressive imagery and true depth of emotion. good to see you writing again, hope to read more soon. Kate x |
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Re: -Symbiotic Rose-
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:49:32 PM AEST
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| "The thorns rip through my flesh" very strong line! |
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