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Someday
Contributed by
TearS
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 11:35:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Someday you will cry
When in a yellow evening
No one will ask for a smile
Then you値l think and cry
No one will wipe your eyes.
Someday you will cry
On a heavy rainy morning
Who used to squeeze you
Whom you used to scold
You値l want again and cry.
Someday you will cry
When you wish to go around
No body will take you
You値l drown into past
Your eyes will bring tears.
Someday you will cry
When you are lonely with life
Who will be coming to show
This life is so wonderful
You値l find nothing and cry.
Someday you will cry
You値l see people around you
In the crowd it痴 hard to breathe
Someone then used to bite your lips
Gentle breeze will make you cry.
Someday you will cry
When your dreams will see me
Your everything will shake
You値l hold the present tight
But all the way you値l cry.
Someday you will cry
The day will come
When the earth will say bye
Thinking about the next life
For me you will cry.
Copyright ﾂｩ
TearS
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2003-10-13 11:35:06]
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Re: Someday
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 10:15:15 PM AEST
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Oh yes...someday all the heartbreakers will cry for what they have lost and what they can't get back...I loved this write, it is very close to how I feel at times. Excellent work...
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Re: Someday
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 01:52:41 AM AEST
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| Hearts of heart breakers will also be broken.. beautiful write. venkat |
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Re: Someday
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 04:04:16 PM AEST
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Oh yes, I think we shall wait until the imminent revenge on The Heartbreakers.... they will think what they could have had and they will see where they went wrong. Why can't they see now though? It would definitely make the situation less tough, don't you think? But in time all will see their wrong.
I think your poem is very well done, so kudos =)
Love Joy and Peace,
JB |
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