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kisses
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 09:24:40 AM in AEST
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your kisses are so special,so rare.
i treasure everyone as if it were my last,
i want them to go on forever,
they take away all my pain.
i save my kisses for only one man,
my dearest love you are that man,.
i thank you for every kiss,
for they are all as unique,
as every star in the nights sky.
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gery_giggles
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2003-10-13 09:24:40]
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Re: kisses
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 11:34:41 AM AEST
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This is simple and beautiful, I love it.
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Re: kisses
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by mckayla on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:05:25 PM AEST
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very beautiful!!
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Re: kisses
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 03:58:09 PM AEST
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I'm just blown away by the night sky and all its beauty. The comparison was lovely. You're writing is beautiful in sense that it shows how truly special every kiss is. We need to treasure them........ Wonderful write (tough luck on the editing thought......)
Love Joy and Peace,
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