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confusion
Contributed by
fairyfloss
on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Confusion clouds my eyes
Anger fogs my head
These scars aren’t healing
These tears wont go away
So much anger
So much pain
Ive been left to drown
Drown in my own confusion
Theres no one watching over me
No one there to save me
All alone in this ocean of confusion
Waves of hate dragging me down
I scream but water suffocates me
I cry but my tears are washed away with the tide
If only my problems could be washed away
If only I could sail away from here
I beg the tide to take me away
To a place not near here
A fresh start
A clean slate
Memories gone
Sentiments lost
Mistakes forgotten
If only the tide would come…
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fairyfloss
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2003-10-13 07:51:42]
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Re: confusion
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 08:01:25 AM AEST
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Wow, this is great..I'll have to read the final poem... well done!!!!!
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Re: confusion
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 06:28:39 PM AEST
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this was awesome yet so sad. I can almost feel your pain since you express it so tangibly. Great poem keep yer chin up.
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