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HELL
Contributed by
ell_03
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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as i enter hell
i look around
my feet are burning
upon the ground
i look above
into the clouds
but there i am not
because i was too proud
instead i am here
with the devil beside me
i look up to god
and send him a plea
he does not see me
down in hell
there is no way out
from where i fell
then i wake up
sweating in my bed
thoughts of hell
still in my head
right then and there
i pray to god from within my heart
no longer shall i be in hell
and never again from god shall i part.
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ell_03
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2003-10-12 18:55:32]
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Re: HELL
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:42:56 PM AEST
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Thank you ell_03 for this poem.
I see a hidden message within,
That not all have to give in to sin,
This is an excellent write,
Full of sadness but bound by the will to fight,
I love to write about strife,
And the pain within my life,
And I am glad for everyone,
That has friends who shine bright as the sun,
Even if it is family, partners, or their god shining from here there or in the clouds above.
Take care ell_03 you write well. |
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Re: HELL
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:11:06 AM AEST
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well done you have talent
Shari |
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