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parables of tawdry audrey - part one
Contributed by
Merry
on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:32:01 PM in AEST
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ovals and chandeliers
prisms in the window
child’s play
toothless grin
hapless face
wandered too far
fell into the drink
got drunk
stayed that way
last chance for happiness
he pirated the answers
when he couldn’t think for himself
she was undecided
cross with him
for making her wait
while he played horseshoes
with a man in a polka dot shirt
dogs barked and birds flew away
the grass grew at least an inch that day
she braided his hair and chastised him
he ate quietly and smiled
hoping it might appease her
~merry~
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Re: parables of tawdry audrey - part one
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by Philipa on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:53:03 PM AEST
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This tawdry audrey sounds like a complicated character. She will inspire you to write many other poems I'm sure. Thanks for sharing.
Philipa
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Re: parables of tawdry audrey - part one
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:57:22 PM AEST
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| really great....reminds me of mckuen's work..... |
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Re: parables of tawdry audrey - part one
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by blackbird on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 10:34:44 PM AEST
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i love the lines:
dogs barked and birds flew away
the grass grew at least an inch that day
great tactile imagery... i can't wait for the next installment ^_^
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Re: parables of tawdry audrey - part one
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:01:23 AM AEST
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Dear Mer,
This is so quaint and original, how did you come up with this form? I just love it. I could see it all happening, and even hear it too.I'm anxiously awaiting the others to come true. Wonderful Write...very enjoyable too!
Lovingcritters
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Re: parables of tawdry audrey - part one
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:13:39 PM AEST
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| very good read and write, i`ll look for more! Crow |
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