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innocence lost
Contributed by
mercedes
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:42:39 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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My life is forever altered
I will never be the same
One day I was sweet and innocent
The next I was forever ruined
Its because of you I feel this way
My life you took from me
So young and impressionable I was
Forced to grow up young
You told me I had to obey
No one would understand
You said if I told
I would only be hated
Sometimes you even brought your friends
It was all a game to you
We played truth or dare
You didn’t care about my pain
I cried, I begged, I pleaded
You would not stop
Until that ever faithful day
Finally you were caught
Although I was only eight
The blame was put on me
I could see the hate in their eyes
As even than they beat me
If only you would of left me alone
I might be free from these demons
Instead oh brother of mine
You took my virginity.
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-10-12 16:42:39]
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Re: innocence lost
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by hope on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:22:08 PM AEST
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| Wow this really hit home...I could feel your anger. |
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Re: innocence lost
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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OMG!! A touching write on such a sad topic. I hope that you have found some peace and was able to deal with this pain...
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Jenni |
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Re: innocence lost
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:59:48 PM AEST
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| keep writing.....let it all out......great job!!! |
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Re: innocence lost
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by symptom_recital on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:08:46 AM AEST
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| A really great write. No one should have to go through such a painful experience, you expressed your anger and hurt perfectly. Thankyou for posting. |
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