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maids and elves

Contributed by ladyfawn on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



i'm so very frustrated
don't know what to do
i feel so unorganized
this im telling you true,

mara's friend moved in
now the place is a mess
her and mara are friends
don't know if it's for the best,

i feel like breaking something
and baby it won't be mine
my calms gone out the window
i am not doing at all fine,

my homes not my castle
neither girl wants to clean
i feel like running away
this place has no sheen,

i'm going to cut them offline
they can talk to themselves
some things have to change
they think we've maids or elves,

feeling taken advantage of
it has really made me mad
spent my day yelling and crying
im tired of feeling had,

how hard is it for two
young ladies to straighten up
the other day it was hell
to even find a clean cup,

im just so upset today
sorry, this is a terrible poem
but i cant delete this mess
that has become my home.

:(






Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-10-12 16:28:57]
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Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:33:17 PM AEST
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You tell 'em Nessa...they are old enough to sit on the internet..they are old enought to clean up their messes. I support you 100%.. you girls get your heads out of your butts and straighten up. Who do ya think feeds you?


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:41:23 PM AEST
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Practice tough love girl,, no housework no net,, good rant

Shari


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:56:01 PM AEST
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Nessa, stay strong sista ; )


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:18:42 PM AEST
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Ahhh... now I understand what Mara was complaining about, lol. Well, you tell 'em! Cleaning builds character! ...don't tell anyone I said that though... lol......

~ Dee


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:19:41 PM AEST
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Awww..Hugs Ness...
I agree with Larry here.. they are old enuff...
Luv, Jenni


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:45:56 PM AEST
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'Tis not a terrible poem
but honest and to the point
Get those girls off their butts
And straighten up your joint :))))

I agree with Larry too ... some ground rules need to be set ... respecting you and your home is only fair ... Jan


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 08:44:59 PM AEST
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good one Nessa - you needed to do this. perhaps you could cast a housecleaning spell on them lol they might pay attention to something like that -

it's okay - i spent years keeping a pin straight house - now i have no idea why i wasted my time - so now there is a lot of dog fur everywhere and ummmm dust. well i must go do the dishes hehehe- you made me feel guilty - hopefully the girls will read this and it will work on them.

love
merry


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 02:00:47 AM AEST
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Dont be upset dear..just tell them as Rakerman said..just encourage them.. venkat


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:26:00 AM AEST
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Dear Nessa,
You said you can't delete the mess....oh yes you can. It's very easy....it's your home....I'm from another school. Sit down and talk to them, and if they can't abide by the rules, then out they or she will go. It's very simple to know. I'd post chores for them to do, and if they can't carry there part of the responsibility then I'd refuse.....to allow them to upset you so! Who need that's Nessa...why should you give up your space? It's yours....do something quick...the monster grows, pretty soon he has arms and legs, and then, guess who goes.......? YOU!
Be firm, be true, be loving.....but most of all CARRY THROUGH!
This is Grandma Lovingcritters and girls too.
ConSue


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 09:53:29 AM AEST
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You couldnt write a bad poem if you tried Nessa, Mars is a sensible girl and you know that...she'll come too

But yeah, you tell them girl, never forget Mars loves you...no matter what happens, and so do i

Hugs, Love 'n kisses
- Becca


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 11:30:02 AM AEST
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Hi ladyfawn,
i know what your going through,
i have a neice,who does the same think.
but i don't have to put up with that.she is not my child,
make them clean up their own mess,or leave.its your house.
your rules.thats cool.


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by Bongo on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 02:45:43 PM AEST
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Don't bang your head or lose your cool
For you are merely the ruling tool
To educate young healthy minds
Of cleanly habits behind the blinds
To be fair and firm and follow through
Should earn respect for only you.

Tis not a silly write
Only feelings of frustrated gripe.


Re: maids and elves (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 10:42:10 AM AEST
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I never had a daughter,
I think I shoulda oughta,
Instead I had two sons,
Nessa, they're the ones.

They're clean and neat and never fight,
And never stay out late at night,
I'll gladly trade, and just for you,
It's one for one or two for two.




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