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Rain
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 01:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Time won`t heal I know its true,
this tattered heart won`t seem to mend. We have all lost love somewhere in time,
remembered words keep coming back,
when broken hearts are all thats left.
"Rain, Rain, go away"
Break my heart another day
whisper why love has to end
never thought of losing her.
Could we have held on just one more night,
had everything been taken from your heart.
I wonder what I might have said,
these simple words keep coming back.
"Rain, Rain go away"
never come again for me
this broken heart might never mend
rain will hide these tears I cry....... Crow
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2003-10-12 13:48:59]
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Re: Rain
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:15:47 PM AEST
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very sad but well written
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Re: Rain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:04:54 PM AEST
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Very sad and touching....
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Re: Rain
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 08:18:22 PM AEST
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| so very touching.......i like the rain.......but it brings so many remembrances........ |
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Re: Rain
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:09:45 AM AEST
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Dry those tears my friend..think like a man in the mirror would ;)
This is soooooooo touching
A really beautiful read. |
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Re: Rain
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:34:29 AM AEST
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Der Crow, my beautiful friend,
You are so kind and loving to others, and it hurts me to see you sad....try to apply what you do for others to yourself too!
Be very kind and loving to Crow, it will help me believe me I know!
So Sad, and yet so hopefully written..like brand new!
Isn't it funny how a phrase, a song, a word can set us all off to being blue.
Beautiful poem...unlike your other writes Crow..they are all beatiful..but this one topped them all!
lovingcritters
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Re: Rain
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by Saira on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:47:10 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt and beautifully written.
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Re: Rain
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by Merry on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:59:49 PM AEST
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into every life a little rain must fall - that's what came to mind when i read this. you are such a caring man, i hope you find love and happiness because you would know how to appreciate it and cherish it.
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