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Broken Arrows
Contributed by
jaeann
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:55:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lucidity only lasts
just a few short days.
Reality sets in his soul
passion splits in many ways.
Brevity lost out with
last century's parlor call.
Stability of spirit
gone with the leaves of fall.
Piety not a quality
that attraction exists.
Rarity of attendance
laspses in a tryst.
Caution rises quickly
a red flag in the heart.
Exhaustion waves it's banner
excitement's brand new start.
Auction off your soul
takers all beware.
Motion in delay
let the day please be fair.
Emotion ruins lives
matters pushed aside.
Friction for the few
destiny abides.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-12 12:55:50]
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Re: Broken Arrows
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by Saira on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 01:08:54 PM AEST
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Nice ending....great write, Jaeann.
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Re: Broken Arrows
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:43:23 PM AEST
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I could just read your writes over and over,, a true talent
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Re: Broken Arrows
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:01:25 PM AEST
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Well said.....good write..
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