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AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:36:52 PM in AEST
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Drooping roses cry
Hollyhock seeds wave Good-bye
Autumn's door shut tight!
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:59:45 PM AEST (User
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i LOVE hollyhocks..........my favorite word for a flower growing up........a flower has to be exotic with the name of hollyhock......cool write!!! |
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 01:16:04 PM AEST (User
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This is great, Connie!
Saira |
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:47:19 PM AEST (User
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excellent, paints a very vivid picture
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:49:19 PM AEST (User
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Great haiku, Connie... very clear picture..
You're doing great..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:50:45 PM AEST (User
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This is a great haiku ... good imagery ... Jan |
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 02:03:47 AM AEST (User
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well said..good images..venkat |
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 08:12:07 AM AEST (User
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love this as i sit here shivering this morning - very chilly outside and the trees are all dressed up for fall - my garden is all finished, chilled to the bone poor little flowers
merry
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 11:50:10 AM AEST (User
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We applaud you, madam
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If autumn is done
Will the winds of winter start?
Which wind belongs where? |
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Re: AUTUMN'S GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:41:28 AM AEST (User
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