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When the Black Moon Rises
Contributed by
Breezer08
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When the black moon rises
The coldest of cold is unleashed
Determined to freeze my heart
Till it breaks in two
When the black moon rises
The most evil of them all
You can hear a pin drop
You can hear me fall
When the black moon rises
You'll see me die
For the black moon
Is my heart and how I feel inside
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Breezer08
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2003-10-12 12:25:21]
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Re: When the Black Moon Rises
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by smilez_n_frownz on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:34:06 PM AEST
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| Don't worry I know what you mean by you feel like that at times,think of it this way,the bright sun you see all day making you warm inside buring the moon bright till it dies.Take care great write. |
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Re: When the Black Moon Rises
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by Saira on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 01:21:22 PM AEST
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Sad...hope your life be illuminated with vibrant colors and peace in your heart and soul. Stay well and happy....great write!
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