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BEFUDDLED
Contributed by
jaeann
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:13:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So many words
not a lot to say
jumbled and mumbled
they cannot find their way.
So much time is needed
never the space to play
fumbled and tumbled
she runs and does not stay.
So many painful years
never a rest in days
rumbled and stumbled
they disrupt her and delay.
So much patience is wanted
not a time she wasn't betrayed
crumbled and humbled
she'll never have all she craves.
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jaeann
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2003-10-12 04:13:12]
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Re: BEFUDDLED
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:19:57 AM AEST
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So True and said so well Jaymee,
Will there ever be enough words to tell
To explain how it felt, and what we did or didn't do right or wrong?
We could live for a million years and still look back and wish we'd have done it another way!
You've searched to the depth of your soul, Jaymee and will never fill up the craving...atleast I never have. I hope you will.
Beautiful understanding write
lovingcritters
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Re: BEFUDDLED
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:26:51 AM AEST
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Quote - "Not a time she wasn't betrayed." - this line, so true...an excellent write. All the best.
Emma/
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Re: BEFUDDLED
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:31:50 AM AEST
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writers block? well written...nothing can change it...but you tell of after affect well
Shari |
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Re: BEFUDDLED
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 10:10:34 AM AEST
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| well written indeed =), I enjoyed readin this one a lot |
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Re: BEFUDDLED
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by Crow on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:25:42 PM AEST
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I love the mystery in your work
the exotic I paint, words that keep
me at bay. and the simple stroke
of your words my friend, you could be
the girl next door. good poem, Crow |
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Re: BEFUDDLED
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 02:06:24 PM AEST
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| Hee, hee. "Befuddled". Such a funny little word. Excellent write. |
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