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Contributed by
CucumberBandit
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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lovelorn’s waiting for her waking
evermore’s eversun
evermoon is never near
change with her every day’s flowers
there’s a music once for two she cannot hear
Copyright ©
CucumberBandit
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2003-10-11 22:58:07]
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by fallensilence on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:01:52 PM AEST
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i really like this. it sort of took me back to some of my old writings. awesome job.
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by blackbird on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 10:20:59 PM AEST
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reminds me of *****s. very nice.
i can hear the music, ne t'inquiete pas...
keep writing. |
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:49:54 AM AEST
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| proof that a few words can often have more impact than pages of prose. this is simply beautiful with emotive language and word play that i really enjoyed. hope to read more from you soon. Kate x |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 10:40:23 PM AEST
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I didn't really understand this... but then again it takes a while for me to get some things...
The words sounded nice together, though.
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